Author Review: Flesh for Sale

When I began FLESH FOR SALE, it was as the next Fleet novella after COMMENCES, at the time the first Fleet novella.  Between the two I had written a short story called Access Denied and it was only while writing FLESH FOR SALE that I thought to associated mindwalkers with the Fleet.  Access Denied (and its sequel Baby Doll) were brought into the Fleet universe, later turned into the novel TRANSFERENCE, now the first in the Fleet Quintet.

The heroine – and she really is a heroine, not just a protagonist – came to me fully formed.  I remember looking around the room I was working in at the time to find inspiration for her surname (I already knew her name was Sistia) and spotted a shoebox on a shelf.  They were for Italian mountain climbing boots (no, I’ve never climbed an Italian mountain)(I’ve never climbed a mountain, for that matter) and the name leapt out at me.  And there she was:  the fabulous Sistia Scarpora who doesn’t, for one single moment, regard herself as fabulous in any way.  Her phenomenal beauty is central to the plot but not in the way beauty is usually portrayed.

I stepped outside of several boxes in creating this novel:  Sistia’s exotic beauty;  her relationship with her father and how this is resolved;  the irony of her relationship with mindwalkers;  and the structure of the novel itself.  It’s an unusual structure in that there are chapters about Sistia told in the third person while most are in the first.  Only at the halfway point does the reason for this becomes wildly apparent.  Instead of a narrative device, it’s in fact an integral part of the plot.  Initially botched in my first attempt at the novel back in its novella days, I worked on it until I got it right.  When I was done, I realised that I had, somehow, graduated as an adult.  FLESH FOR SALE was, at the time, my most mature work and Sistia Scarpora remains, for me, an unsurpassable creation of fully grown woman-ness.

There’s more world building in this Fleet novel than in the others.  While TRANSFERENCE is intentionally claustrophobic, Sistia at least gets to travel a bit.  Creating Lomensis, the old world she lives on, and Narthenaecia, the city where she grows up, was fantastically exciting.  After TRANSFERENCE, readers would be familiar with Lomensis as planet Nigel is a Lomensii colony world and Aster plans to move there (providing she can get a passport.)  I also loved creating Wet City – it’s a highly stylised and super-modern version of the City of London, all the glittery, shiny best bits without the history.

Readers will also recognise several characters that were briefly introduced in TRANSFERENCE:  Vincent Gomenzi, Dragør Johnson;  even President Waughmaker gets a mention.  The tumultuous events of TRANSFERENCE are barely a blip in history from the point of view of FLESH FOR SALE.  Centuries have passed and the Fleet are no longer a rumour.  Mindwalkers are no longer a myth.  And Vincent Gomenzi shouldn’t be alive.

FLESH FOR SALE remains one of my strongest works, not just because Sistia has to face the Fleet but because she has to face her own personal demons.  I also got to rewrite my own history, surely a writer’s greatest joy.



About susannahjbell

I am a writer of science fiction and other strange and surreal works. I mostly write novels and the occasional novelette. My published works include A Doorway into Ultra, the Fleet Quintet and the Exodus Sequence. I live in London in an attic flat but really want to live in a tree. I wanted to be an astrophysicist but would settle for an alien abduction. I write because I don’t know what to read.
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